Getting the band back together
So, after some thought and watching Avatar: The Last Airbender for the first time, I believe I'll be returning to Guntram and Jakob from "The Sacrifice" and see if they've got another go in them.
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"Jason, I'll tell you what, I'm going to send this story on to John O'Neill for his thoughts, so don't consider it rejected just yet. <snip> Sincerely,
Joseph McCullough
Assistant Editor
Black Gate Magazine"
Dear Jason, Thank you for your submission to Black Gate magazine, unfortunately, I'm going to have to pass on this one. I think the story was very well told and well written, I just didn't feel that it was quite tight enough for its length. I was excited to see the team fight the herd, but I thought it took too long to get to this action and that it was too short when it did. I hope you will submit to Black Gate again, as I think your writing shows a lot of promise. Sincerely, Joseph McCullough Assistant Editor Black Gate Magazine These guys are a semi-pro outfit, so this actually makes me feel pretty good.